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 英語で論文を書くことは難しいと思います。ただでさえ、日本語でも書くの難しいのだから・・・今日はエッセイの書き方をちょっくら書いてみます
ではまず私が大学入学したての時の小論文を載せます。題はCulture Shockです。

 We did an activity. A teacher made two groups. One group is A, another group is B. A group spoke as loud as possible and was friendly. I’m A group. Therefore, I expressed friendliness to B groups by lightly touching their hands, arms and shoulders lightly. However, B group did opposite. They didn’t make eye contact. There are a lot of problems. We could not communicate because the B group men escape me. I thought he didn’t want to communicate. After the activity, I told him you want to communicate me. His answer is he want to communicate me however, I don’t want to touch from me. Then, I knew I want to be you want, I want to be you no want.
 In this case, I expressed friendliness however, he didn't want to touch his body. I think I was shocked and he was shocked. I have been to Austria. I was surprised there. I didn’t know a girl who told me “How are you?” I don’t do that to stranger. I’m Japanese. She isn’t Japanese. I felt culture shock. I didn’t confuse because she was so kindness. I know an idiom. When in Rome do as the Romans do. This things is very important. I think, if I go to other country I have to respect their culture. However, I’m not afraid of failure when I talk other cultures people. It’s mean I can tell their opinions. If they feel bad, I say sorry.
 The most important thing is if you stand in front of big wall you never climb or break. You should pat the wall. If you do that, you can communicate them and be happy.This activity was good experience for me. It will be useful if I go to abroad.

まぁ見て分かる通り結構ひどいものです笑 載せるのが恥ずかしかったですもん笑 実際この後勿論professorからの指導があって結構変わったんですが、こっちの方が何がいけないかとか説明するのが楽なのでこっち使ってます。文法のミスだけではないんです。
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ではまず私が大学入学したての時の小論文を載せます。題はCulture Shockです。

 We did an activity. A teacher made two groups. One group is A, another group is B. A group spoke as loud as possible and was friendly. I’m A group. Therefore, I expressed friendliness to B groups by lightly touching their hands, arms and shoulders lightly. However, B group did opposite. They didn’t make eye contact. There are a lot of problems. We could not communicate because the B group men escape me. I thought he didn’t want to communicate. After the activity, I told him you want to communicate me. His answer is he want to communicate me however, I don’t want to touch from me. Then, I knew I want to be you want, I want to be you no want.
 In this case, I expressed friendliness however, he didn't want to touch his body. I think I was shocked and he was shocked. I have been to Austria. I was surprised there. I didn’t know a girl who told me “How are you?” I don’t do that to stranger. I’m Japanese. She isn’t Japanese. I felt culture shock. I didn’t confuse because she was so kindness. I know an idiom. When in Rome do as the Romans do. This things is very important. I think, if I go to other country I have to respect their culture. However, I’m not afraid of failure when I talk other cultures people. It’s mean I can tell their opinions. If they feel bad, I say sorry.
 The most important thing is if you stand in front of big wall you never climb or break. You should pat the wall. If you do that, you can communicate them and be happy.This activity was good experience for me. It will be useful if I go to abroad.

まぁ見て分かる通り結構ひどいものです笑 載せるのが恥ずかしかったですもん笑 実際この後勿論professorからの指導があって結構変わったんですが、こっちの方が何がいけないかとか説明するのが楽なのでこっち使ってます。文法のミスだけではないんです。
何がいけないのかは次のブログで説明します。 一度ページ移動しますが、続きを見るで次のサイトに行けます。
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